Chapter OneA Chapter by CherryPopRoxxPleasant evening turns to horror... She couldn't hear the screams and cries over her own, as the help they so desired arrived... lateDirty Blood Dozens and dozens of voices blanketed the warm air in the crowded food court. Some had come to get away from the teeming shops, have a relaxing sit and maybe grab a bite, and others gleefully conversed about all the goodies they bought over a steamy latte. Salem Jones was a million miles away as she stared down at her half eaten corndog, snapping out of it when she noticed a hand reach over to her tray and grab a fry, giving it a dip in ketchup before it wandered away. "So you gonna show me my present?" she heard him ask. She looked up and cracked a "you'd like that" smile in his direction, as she reached down to grab the bags. Her friend, Jack Thompson, slid the tray in his direction as Salem brought up the bushel of various plastic bags. It was nice of him, but she was partly sure that he just wanted more french fries. "AND my gift?" he asked slyly, giving her a grin as he took a sip from her drink. She shoved gifts back into the bags, Jack finishing off the remainder of her meal and drink, she was thankful it was not wasted. "So you really have to go so soon? If you stick around, I could help you with your bags" he told her, sucking down the last of the soda. She was soon shuffling through the crowds, muttering inaudible forgiveness every time she bumped a shoulder or bag, and thankfully she was out of the bursting shopping mall in minutes. Maybe Jack had to stay and get her gift? Though knowing him he probably just wanted to screw around at the arcade or comic book shop... She took a nice deep breath of cold air, still shocked that the weather had dropped so low this year! She nearly jumped out of her skin when she heard the sound of running behind her growing louder and louder, she turned quickly to see what the source was, fearing the worst as her mind spiraled. But her entire body mellowed in relief. Stopping short of her a couple of feet was a doubled over Jack, trying to catch his breath, a hand out. "Jack? I thought you were staying at the mall?" But she felt a violent push from behind and her body fell forward, confusion and shock erupting in her. Salem barely made a sound as she tried to wrestle away, but whoever pushed her down was getting heavier on her body. She felt a swipe at her back, her coat ripping loudly, she started to scream in shock. Jack threw his bags down and launched forward, trying to get the attention of the attacker, it swiped in his direction. Salem took the chance to crawl away, successfully getting her body from beneath the enemy, she positioned herself on her bottom so she could stand, just in time to witness the assailant knock out Jack with an enormous fist. © 2009 CherryPopRoxx |
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Added on April 18, 2009 AuthorCherryPopRoxxCAAboutI'm nineeen years old and from southern california ;) I love writing and I'd love your good or bad critique! more..Writing
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