Loves First Bloom

Tender is my memory, of loves first bloom

Yesterdays, blend into the Sea, of, Now

 For now, are you in my heart, as were you, back then

And now my heart, my soul, is linked to yours

Two hearts, beating as one

Waves of passion, are now a seasoned flame

So kiss me, as you wake, and embrace me, warm and tender

For tender, is flower, that blooms, through December.

Author's Note

any comments are welcome

Reviews

[Jwana Creer Yeshua]

I love this poem too. Love...most people think that love is just to be showen every once in a while. But love can be showen all the time. Like the flower that blooms through December. The flower never dies which when translated means love never ends. It's so much more then love...but showing that special someone that you care. Give them a kiss, hug them, and hold them tenderly. Great Write! I will be looking for more in the near future.

Humbly,
Jwana Creer Yeshua

[William Michael Reeves]

Excellent idea! A flower named Tender. It would look something like dripping fuchsia as fragile as an iris white as the snow it melts in the heat of your passion.

[Cherrie]

My flower garden has one 🌹 left. It budded in December and bloomed last week. Now it only has a few petals left.
It was fitting that you found this poem. Made me smile to read it once more.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

thankyou so much for entry into my competition, i loved this a lot, thanks, and good luck

[Cherrie]

You're welcome:)

[Jim Clarke]

This is a beautiful expression of romantic love.

[An owl on the moon]

Wonderful and tender, so sweetly moving across time. To capture those first moments brings them alive again in the present. Beautiful...

[charlotte talley]

yes, i liked this short poem. you put alot of meaning behind your first love bloom. nice write. keep it up.

[larryb]

Well done and i feel the romance in your heart ...

[shythatway]

Awww.. Flower blooming through December and a seasoned flame. I really loved those parts. Beautiful metaphors =) Thank you for sharing this.

[deeps]

This is so sweet and beautiful.
like the flow of this as well.