never heard of chaiku ... i like the meter your poem takes .. the mix of iambic and trochaic arrangements works .. it presents a very specific rhythm when i read it ..especially out loud ...love the title and theme ..very romantic ... simple, the way it should be. :)
E.
by nature I prefer free verse, but I really liked the way the images told a story.
thank yo.. read moreby nature I prefer free verse, but I really liked the way the images told a story.
thank you, for the review.
This is beautiful and sweet to read. Congratulations, your poem Chilled wine warm kiss has come 3rd place EXPERT in my poetry contest LOVE. Thanks for your beautiful submission
I raise my Chianti to your chaiku which goes down fine with or without wine......Never knowingly written one of these, looks far too complicated. I applaud ya.................Neville
Hi, Dear Cherrie!
It's only Richard, paying a visit to tell you what I think is a most lovely, fetching, sigh-worthy piece of poetical romance. Your creative heart and tender notions truly caress my senses.
It's been a long while since my olde pen scribed a Chaiku, but you've inspired me anew (see Mockingbird).
I have never came close to anything as wonderful as yours is in flow, imagery, nuance, timbre, or bliss-filled moment.
Though, the quatrain verses are normally spaced apart, yours work well in ease of rhythm and flow … and, Cherrie, I really do love this sweet little warmer. : )
Happy hugs 'n warmest thanks for sharing You, Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard
I have not created many of these but they lend to a most graceful flow and I look forward to reading.. read moreI have not created many of these but they lend to a most graceful flow and I look forward to reading yours
6 Years Ago
Me, too, Cherrie … I'll like that very much. : )
Have you any more Chaiku posted here?
never heard of chaiku ... i like the meter your poem takes .. the mix of iambic and trochaic arrangements works .. it presents a very specific rhythm when i read it ..especially out loud ...love the title and theme ..very romantic ... simple, the way it should be. :)
E.
by nature I prefer free verse, but I really liked the way the images told a story.
thank yo.. read moreby nature I prefer free verse, but I really liked the way the images told a story.
thank you, for the review.
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