Moonbeams

a cold Winter's night

The crisp cold night added depth to the valley. 

The sleeping wind nestled in the trees, 

waiting for the first light of day. 

While the easy moving stream, 

pooled lighted moonbeams in the eddy. 

Reviews

[mou]

It conjures up some of the serene days from the past. Stunning
-mou

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful imagery and powerful use of the senses.

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) Thank you? Thomas

[emmajoygreen]

Sending you yet more thanks for such beautiful words plus, of course, a gentle hug or few, my dear friend.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Emma 😊 I must confess I am starting to feel like myself again.

[Mauricio Montoya]

I had to read twice, you brought memories when I would ride train's sometimes I would be stuck around tree's cold as it could be all I had was the sky as I layed to go to sleep. Thank you for

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you.
I'm so glad it spoke to you awaking moments from days long past.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Those are the writes that make you wonder, again thank you.

[Lorry]

You didn't need the pic Cherrie, because I'm already there! ☺
Superbly captured.

[Cherrie Palmer]

😊thank you Lorry. There is something magical about Moonlight on a the water.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love the description of the night time. The moonbeams sparkling on the water.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you 😊

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. My favorite times of day are twilight and night time. All the magic, wonder and mystery as the earth around us quiets and slumbers. I could visualize the descriptions in my mind

[James Eichenlaub]

Today is my first day with the group, and I must say, this was a welcoming piece. I love descriptive poetry. This is beautifully written and draws many images of past events for me. Thank you!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you James. And welcome to the cafe. I hope you are able to make this a cozy stop along your writing journey. There are many good writers here. We try to offer support and friendship.
I look forward to returning your visit.

[emmajoygreen]

That is a painting that Ken Simm might sit and share with you, Cherrie. What wonderfully created words, they create this season's tones and directions. Beautiful

Here again on 23/3 because your poem is so very beautiful. Plus, leaving a happy hug, hoping there is a smile or few butterflying your corner of the world.

[Cherrie Palmer]

😊thank you Emma

[Anita Frader]

Such a vision of winter's serene beauty. Love.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Anita 😊

[Anita Frader]

🙂 you are welcome

[Woody]

God, this is so beautiful, Cherrie. Puts my pitiful attemps at poetry to chame. Love this to bits.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I show the image of the Moon reflected in the water and it just spang to life. As I tried to layer in the other elements.
Thank you for visiting my work and I'm thrilled you liked it.