for now

Haiku 5/7/5

Stillness settles in
for now Night is fast asleep
until Day is done

Reviews

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yup to the point and awesome!

[Cherrie]

Thank you Sky :)

[Sam Harty]

Very profound and beautiful!

[Cherrie]

Thank you Sam.
I like to take a stab at a haiku every now and again.

[Davidgeo]

Day into Night, into Stillness... a dream, for now.

[Cherrie]

Maybe overly simple but simple can be good after a crazy day.

[Davidgeo]

Simplicity is far more difficult to say anything with. Most people say too much while they convey nothing.

[Davidgeo]

... it's a sign of confidence and emotional maturity to express yourself simply.

[Cherrie]

:) thank you David

[red93]

The Queen of Haiku strikes again. Daylight is starting to stretch out again, and Spring is just round the corner ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Cherrie]

Tony, I am so ready for Spring.

[red93]

Know the feeling Cherrie definitely.

[John Sullivan]

A fine haiku, I commend you for writing in a style I've got no knack for

[Cherrie]

Thank you John

[Patricia]

Time is going to fast for me, day or night...to be expected as I get older, I just go with it. Lovely writing.

[Cherrie]

:) thank you Pat yes the older we get the faster it seems to go.

[Betty Hermelee]

Days sometimes move quickly when we're busy and our mood is up, but sometimes days drag along when we're we feel blah... and we welcome nightfall and sleep....nice!
Warmly, B

[Cherrie]

I agree with that. Sometimes bedtime can't get here fast enough.

[Betty Hermelee]

I know! And you’re very welcome Cherrie
Warmly, B

[emmajoygreen]

Perfect in every way, Cherrie

[Cherrie]

thank you, Emma. I think I'm going to write a couple more from different sides of the timetable.

[emmajoygreen]

Whatever you write will be very typically you - first class, my friend. Look forward to paying tribute as I have for many years. :)