Unaware

Unaware

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer

I know you’ve been waiting on me,

for your splendid light to see.

But in this haze, it could not be.

Till this morning unaware,

your brilliant light lifted my despair.

As salmon pink skimmed the shore,

and your warming glow filled the moor.

The endless night now was gone,

And a bright Winter’s Day followed the dawn.

© 2023 Cherrie Palmer


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Dear friend, tis said we can find our own remedies.. and see how true that can be. Dawn's gradual arrival is utterly breath-taking. Your words suggest what is found in the dawn - Light, takes its time.. but once found is there with and for a searching but hopeful spirit. Here to hold hands...

A wonderful poem.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

10 Months Ago

Thank you Emma and a heartfelt hug for you as well.
emmajoygreen

10 Months Ago

Gentle thoughts, gentle smiles.. strong friendship.



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beautiful descriptive! I felt like I was there....

Posted 9 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

9 Months Ago

Thank you very much
Tremendous imagery. Beautiful.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

9 Months Ago

:) thank you Thomas
A wonderful poem for the morning. The sun on our face. A true blessing dear Cherrie. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


Without the darkness what use is the light am i right?

Posted 10 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

10 Months Ago

Yes. In the depths of the night our eyes adjust. It's not till morning we can truly see.
Dear friend, tis said we can find our own remedies.. and see how true that can be. Dawn's gradual arrival is utterly breath-taking. Your words suggest what is found in the dawn - Light, takes its time.. but once found is there with and for a searching but hopeful spirit. Here to hold hands...

A wonderful poem.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

10 Months Ago

Thank you Emma and a heartfelt hug for you as well.
emmajoygreen

10 Months Ago

Gentle thoughts, gentle smiles.. strong friendship.
A beautiful poem that seems inspired by wonderful sunrise. And I can say, a sunrise is some of the best poetic inspiration I have found. Really nice.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

10 Months Ago

Thank you Will
...and yes I agree.
Wow great spirit so profound such a good read, love how the words come together. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

10 Months Ago

Thank you Mauricio
Beautifully laid, Dear Cherrie 🍒

I love your metaphors, smooth/even syntactic flow, deeply emotive embraces, how the wonder of your fertile imagination dances upon the page, spot-on rhythm 'n rhymes, but most of all, expressions of the hope-filled, new, 🌈 joyfully-brighter days to come.

To my mind's-eye, Dear Cherrie, your best work to date … thank you ever-so gratefully for openly sharing such a sincere part of You.
Warmest blessings to You on that bright, salmon-pink shore in 2024 ⁓ Richard 🌤

Posted 10 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

10 Months Ago

Thank you Richard. I appreciate your review on this simple little poem. Your friendship means a lot.. read more
I really liked reading this. It's like I can feel the warmth of the winter sun and see the beautiful colors reflecting off the shore. The way you describe the transition from darkness to light is amazing too.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Cherrie Palmer

11 Months Ago

Thank you Grace :)
grace

11 Months Ago

My pleasure :)

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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