Two Winds

Brightly shined the sun

his stolen warmth missing

for the two winds spoke

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie... we have certainly had a lot of Sun and Wind
at the same time. Lovely Tropical Weather. I call it Mango Season.
The Palm trees Dance in Tango style while we whisper and dream in the warm Sand.
"For the two Winds spoke is my favorite Line. softly, Pat

[Cherrie Palmer]

"Mango Season" now that sounds spectacular.

[red93]

Excellent Cherrie and definitely we are in that Japanese short-form territory again where your Work is so strong. This has lovely mythic qualities ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Tony 😊 I may tweak this one (eventually)
To: as the winds were conversing.

[red93]

Interesting - I am not averse to either version ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem was really beautiful! The way you described the sun shining brightly, but his stolen warmth missing was so evocative and poignant. It was like you were conveying a sense of loss and longing. The line about the two winds speaking was especially powerful - it was like you were describing a sense of conflict and tension. The way you used personification to describe the sun and the winds was really effective - it was like you were bringing the natural world to life. Overall, I thought your poem was really well written and thought-provoking.

[William Michael Reeves]

Has it been windy there where you are? I see a thread in the ink as it scrawls across your page.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Oh yeah it has been very windy.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a cold wind will block the warmth and the sun will look like a cheater...expressing love, but chilling the heart instead.
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I know. I hate it when that happens.

[emmajoygreen]

The other day, here in the south of England, the sky was as blue as blue can be, not a cloud in sight. Yet, when I got out of my car, the air was so cold I knew that in the hour I'd been inside the vehicle the wind, the breeze, the weather.. had played tricks. Strange weather, strange mood., strange going-on.

You have shared thirteen finely set words and nudged this reader's rambling thoughts and memories!

[Cherrie Palmer]

I think I'll take the Sun to small claims court for false advertising. 🤔

[emmajoygreen]

I laughed very loudly as i read that.. still smiling! Love it! Enjoy Sunday, hope restful smiley and more, dear friend. x

[Lorry]

Absolutely no comment! I ain't jinxing the fact that the big yellow skyball of fire has strolled into view and looks like it might even stick around for a day or two, which will make this spring the best summer we've ever had! 😊
But for the no comment, I think the winds are talking to the sun to say, let's blow ourselves back to Scotland now and you son, can swap places, now that we've got their expectations up again!
But if they ask, tell them a big boy made me say it then ran away. 😊

[Cherrie Palmer]

They other day we had a clear blue sky and tones of sunshine and a 30mph gust s needless to say it was a breezy 44

[willweb]

I feel there is a deeper meaning to this than I am grasping but I will say, it has been the windiest year so far here that I can ever remember. And cooler pretty much than it normally is this time of year because of the wind. Nicely written.

[Cherrie Palmer]

We always have lots of wind in the Spring. My hair will testify to that.