Dancing Cranes

Dancing Cranes

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer

Autumn’s moon,
is brightly arrayed.
The mounted jewel,
crests its ring.
As dancing cranes,
beneath it sing.
And the garden’s blooms,
sway with the breeze.

© 2022 Cherrie Palmer


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Magnificent, you should be proud.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Thank you Light
light and ashes

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome..You did a fine job.
What lovely verse and vision. I really like the artwork too, is it yours? The abrupt perspective is reminiscent of Japanese art which I've always been a fan of.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

I'm afraid the artwork is mine :) I don't have a good eye for drawing but that doesn't keep me f.. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

1 Year Ago

Well, I think you did wonderfully. I like to draw too but my eight year old is a real artist. She's .. read more
Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

That is exciting to watch. See her grow in creativity and skill.
Oh how I do so love to read your poems dear cherrie.
Yours will be the last and most wonderful one this evening that I read, as I now must go and finish making the fish stew I started hours ago...
Lisa, now in Spain

Posted 1 Year Ago


The consummation of art and skill (on your part) truly enhances the dance. Such an eloquent piece, Cherrie!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful artwork and amazing words shared dear Cherrie. You create for the reader. A beautiful place and thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

:) thank you
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

You are welcome dear Cherrie.
I love this Cherrie, so beautifully phrased and delivered with real poise and consummate skill. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Thank you Tony
I hope you had a blessed Christmas and a happy new year 🎉
red93

1 Year Ago

Many thanx Cherrie - not too bad at all thanks to generous relative and friends 👍👍👍👍👍
cranes are art
many cultures place them in a point of 'spiritual reverence'
your write gives life to their 5 letter species

i am most fortunate to live where the crane can make appearances now and then to my chicken/duck enclosure to take a meal from their troughs
30+ min drive i can view thousands and thousands of swans and snow geese for their winter residence
what a grand world we do live ... except for the creature man

and they do dance, their songs in a tune of their own

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

Yes their rhythm is unique and graceful.
dearest Cherrie.. my daughter gave me two Artistic Rose metal Cranes standing Tall for our Front Yard. They Greet each day and Season with renewed Amazing Grace. Your words have captured the Beauty of touching 💕 hearts. tenderly, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


This poem has nice cadence. Maybe it's just me, and billigami, but it felt like an origami mobile of words. Cranes made of metal and spinning around in the breeze.

I've been trying to catch up with everyone. Thought I'd read Cherrie today expecting to spend the day reading a dozen new poems. Surprised to only find one. Hope all is well with you?

Posted 1 Year Ago


Cherrie Palmer

1 Year Ago

It's been to hectic to write ✍️ this semester football games, band and ROTC. the kids keep me on.. read more
Loving the title of this Cherrie! And the image and movement along a story line brings it full circle. TFS.

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on September 22, 2022
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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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