Amen

Amen

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer

-giving thanks-

Seek guidance from above.

As we meditate in pure love.

Taking in the breath of God.

Breath in
- -
And in again
- -
Once more to our fullest.

Lungs finally expanded
- -
Body awakes.
- -
Release.

Freeing God’s breath. That command to live.
- -
Again, three times the breath
Once more, feel the fullness
feed the soul, clear the mind
- -
And release.

Release doubts and fears
Judgements, anger, and pain.

Lift up holy hands.

[Reaching God is not a formula but surrender and a dedicated path.]

And praise His Holy name.

[Do not waste a day
that could be your last.]

But live life to its
Fullest and give,
those around you,
Your best.
-Amen-

© 2022 Cherrie Palmer


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A daily start to get up and go! Thanks for sharing Cherrie. /Freds.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

Good morning Fred and yes this is an very important part of each day.
Love this Cherrie
Absolutely true

Posted 2 Years Ago


This read like a play with some phrases in parentheses where action happens. As much directions to peace, as a prayer for peace. I really like the 'three times' stanza. This is unique and original, as your poetry usually is.

Posted 2 Years Ago


A nice, peaceful piece. As I read it, I felt at ease, exhaling, almost like a meditation exercise written down in the form of a poem. I think meditation can be a excellent tool for individuals to feel at one with themselves and it serves as a reminder that one needs to live to enjoy life. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


A beautiful prayer Cherrie. I felt your serene self. I no longer follow an organised religion (I did for years until I discovered the bigotry within the church) because I believe it has caused so many problems in the world and is not all encompassing. It can be divisive. I do however admire your strength of faith. I look to the natural world these days to find answers. Sometimes I get them, sometimes not. I wish for peace, understanding and tolerance here on this planet for all, regardless of their beliefs.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

The world is God's cathedral. To be enjoyed and cared for.
God's love is amazing, and so is his grace and mercy. Enjoyed this

Posted 2 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

Yes. His love keeps me charged and His endless mercy keeps me humble.
Cherrie, I think this is an excellent poem and, we need more people to bring our Lord into their homes. Sunday I was actually thinking of writing something about my walk with God experience but, couldn’t pull it together. I also think your response to the non believer was very good. God does give us free will. Nicely done. Temp

Posted 2 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

Thank you T😊
I look forward to seeing your poem.
were is your god? certainly not in Ukraine or Syria or Africa or Venezuela or Bosnia or European countries during WWII ?
seems to me there is a serious ball dropping
might need to ask WHY?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

Good morning :)
Your just in time for a cup of coffee ☕️
Religion often misses i.. read more
keith

2 Years Ago

good morning, hope your coffee is/was as good as mine
thanks for your thoughts after my count.. read more
Cherrie Palmer

2 Years Ago

You too:) we are enjoying a much needed rain

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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