Lightly Feathered

Eventide caresses the sky.
Undertones of plum are lightly
feathered.
End of day is secured
by retracting light.
While silence is interrupted
by the wind.

Reviews

[W. Barrett Munn]

This is a fine poem. The interruption by the wind of the quiet of the poem is a nice tension.

[Cherrie]

Thank you W. Barrett Munn
I love listening to the birds and insects. It is very therapeutic, but I really enjoy the sounds the wind and or the rain makes.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like that idea of silence being interrupted by something that only makes a sound when it is whipping violently...and yet...this poem is of a calming effect.
j.

[Cherrie]

I take my morning coffee on the back porch most days and was thinking of a softer breeze than that :) more of a rustling that moves through the trees and waves the corner of my flag.

[JE Falcon]

Short, thoughts full of visions, almost as if it were about to say more.

[Aura]

What a beautiful way of capturing the end of yet another day. The nightsky, sprinkled with dark purple undertones, the sunlight retracts, going to sleep, or perhaps... to light up another part of the world. Silence, ever so silent, sings of the wind. Thanks for sharing!

[Temperance]

..while silence in interrupted by the wind.
What a great line. Very nice poem, Cherrie! Calm at the end of the day. Enjoyed the read. Temp

[Cherrie]

:) Thank you Temp. You know me I like to keep it simple.

[Temperance]

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