Eventide caresses the sky.
Undertones of plum are lightly
feathered.
End of day is secured
by retracting light.
While silence is interrupted
by the wind.
Such a calm and comforting scene you have created with your word Cherrie. Really nice. My favorite time of the day.
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
Thank you Will and yes, I love that time of day.
And when it's not cold I love the sky abo.. read moreThank you Will and yes, I love that time of day.
And when it's not cold I love the sky about 2am.
I truly enjoyed reading this. It was pleasantly soothing, even with the wind interrupting the quiet observation of it all.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Thank you 😊 ya know I enjoy a tranquil moment of silence as the sun sets, but I also love to he.. read moreThank you 😊 ya know I enjoy a tranquil moment of silence as the sun sets, but I also love to hear the wind moving through the trees and across the water.
dearest Cherrie... I am reviewing Poems while the Sun has been setting ... the perfect time to read your Poem, as the Night has fallen and dreams are settling on the soft feathered Clouds. We have been blessed with enough Rain to keep the Flowers full of Nectar for the Hummers and Butterflies. Poetry plays softly as the Chimes move in the Wind . If only the World would settle this Softly... we might create a Peaceful Conclusion to all the Destruction and Misfortune. Prayers and Love, Pat
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
What beautiful conditions to read poetry by. All that's missing is a glass of ice tea -hang on and .. read moreWhat beautiful conditions to read poetry by. All that's missing is a glass of ice tea -hang on and I'll grab the pitcher. :)
A feathered sky at dusk is a painting that is both unique and irreplaceable, making one wish that interruption would not cause to miss, not even the wind. Thanks for sharing. /Frederick.
A beautiful way of showing us the beginning of dusk...using the color "plum"....the tides are quiet, the light is dimming...only a breeze disrupts the silence...so few words with much imagery and description of the part of the day. NICE!
Best, B
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Good morning Betty. Welcome to Monday. Thank you for reading this little poem.
There is som.. read moreGood morning Betty. Welcome to Monday. Thank you for reading this little poem.
There is something relaxing watching the night bloom. I long to capture the moment.
wow! exquisite says i! ... powerfully packed piece! .. love your imagery .. it is just right .. every line is a favorite, Cherrie! well done and thanks for sharing this precious moment of serenity .. at one with the surroundings .. really really like the wind in this .. lightly feathered indeed!
E.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
:) Thank you Gene. I almost changed the last line. But decided I liked smiple break in the rhythm. .. read more:) Thank you Gene. I almost changed the last line. But decided I liked smiple break in the rhythm.
I'm delighted you liked it.
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