Water's Edge

31 syllables 5 7 5 7 7

cool moss kiss my feet
guided by moonbeams I go
a mirrored lake waits
as I watch it ever low
soon it is swallowed whole

Reviews

[Temperance]

cool moss kiss my feet.....I can feel it! I have been guided by moonbeams to a mirrored lake so can relate to this. So nicely written Ms. Cherrie.

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) There's nothing better than the feel of moss on bare feet
:) I'm so happy you got to tag along with me

[Temperance]

I enjoyed the trip!