Whispering waters

whispering waters 

tickling over rock and bend 

 then fading too naught

Reviews

[JE Falcon]

Wow, so much said in such a short space. And said so visually. Thanks.

[Cherrie]

Thank you 😊 I guess I'm missing the river.

[JE Falcon]

I was seeing a trickling stream, fading into thoughts of yesterday.

[Vertigo Cat1111]

A short but sweet one. I don’t know if this was the intention or not but it seemed to me a metaphor how nothing lasts forever. But water does make an everlasting impact at times. Beautiful words. Thank you so much for sharing. (:

[Cherrie]

Thank you. 😊 for stopping by.
Sometimes I do sneak metaphors into a piece. However, I was just thinking of the beautiful sounds on the river.