Silken Delights

alabaster glow
circumvents the heated sun
for silken delights

Author's Note

For fun- let your review be a variation

Reviews

[shadrach hah]

Hi Cherrie, how I do love this silken delight. Writing in Haiku form isn't always easy.
Passion now does flow,
temple's shining in the sun,
Sol does sing love's song.

Not too good at these. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs always....Mike.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Mike.

[Cherrie Palmer]

This one had to grow on me I felt like something was missing.

[shadrach hah]

These shorter writes are really hard for me to do.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I lean towards shorter pieces. When you write one think it as a telegram.

[William Michael Reeves]

I love a challenge Cherrie! Here you go...

Delights growing strong
In the white heat of the sun
Circling silk spun

[Cherrie Palmer]

Beautiful :) I love it. Thank you so much.

[Richard🖌]

Alluringly beautiful Senryu, Cherrie🔥

fire flickers pon walls
silhouette lovers embrace
warm ecstasies shared

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Richard. The verdict is still out on this one. I'm pretty sure I'll make a change. I'm still knocking it around.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I loved your poet reply.

[Allen Smuckler]

Nice haiku
all about nature
I liked it

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Allen:)

[Kerra]

Lovely Haiku, it's 5,7,5 so it is perfect in content and context
Awesome Cherrie

[Cherrie Palmer]

I'm not sure about the flow on this one