Ill Wind

Autumn's adornment
was cast down by an ill wind
cause - death by - Winter

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Now that’s truly simply beautiful

[Cherrie Palmer]

😀thank you Julie

[JE Falcon]

Short and sweetly sour, this poem well written. Oh, to die such a lonesome death, poor Autumn.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you :) the notion just sat there in my mind.

[Pete]

so creatively well done. truly captures the spirit of fall. terrific haiku ... :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Pete. That Winter wind has bite. I liked the idea of Winter killing off Autumn. Normally I write about the seasons yielding to each other. But being an Agatha Christie fan I couldn't help myself.

[Pete]

I adore nature. .what would life be without seasons? we have our seasons too. ... :)

[barleygirl]

I love how you find completely unusual ways to describe the standard falling leaves of autumn! (((HUGS)))

[Cherrie Palmer]

Yes a early Winter wind will be charged with the crime. Film at 11

[Kerra]

I am not looking for winter at all, It gets too cold for me.
Awesome Haiku.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love this one, Cherrie.
really fits what has happened here.
No more than a day of fall, and boom...along comes the wind and the trees are barren just like the month of November.
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I like to write about the yielding and blending of the seasons, but every now and then I like the idea of them killing each other off (must be the Alfred Hitchcock in me).

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha ... doesn't have a chance in Mother's Courtroom :))))))) enjoyed this experience Cherrie! thanks for sharing!
E.

[Cherrie Palmer]

https://facebook.com/events/s/writers-group-meeting/560147451934976/
Meeting is Saturday at 2 baxter co library. So no running in the halls.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha i can't run any more darlin' :)))))))) and i am so sorry to say i have company coming that will be here for a week .. Sat. included .. if i can raise interest in going i will come .. at any rate will follow the link and get hooked up and stay in the know .. make the next one .. thanks Cherrie!!!

[Cherrie Palmer]

I am delighted to hear you will have a house filled of loved ones.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ... it will be nice.

[Gee]

And there it is in a nutshell, naked trees and weather fit only for a polar bear.Hope
Nicely done Cherrie

[Cherrie Palmer]

I always think it's funny we layer up for the season and the the trees dress down.

[Chris Shaw]

The glory of autumn turns into the bleak and greys of winter days. Everything sleeps, but the promise of spring is never far away, and that is where my heart lies. Beautifully visual Cherrie.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie... a quaint Haiku that
touches our Winter Soul.
"Pray that once again...
Spring Tulips will multiply
Like Crocus Kisses..."
A Haiku for you dear Heart... gently, Pat

[Cherrie Palmer]

The idea was to cute to pass on . I'm glad you like it. :)