Tempestuous Garden

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pretty yellow bloom
stretching tender leaves of green

always on the move
multiplying by the day

never scared to change
longing to chase a zephyr

weaving future seeds
scattered amongst the concorse
shedding your yellows to fly

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love how your lovely garden scene is so dynamic! (((HUGS)))

[Cherrie Palmer]

Well I'll let you in on a secret. Dandelions although little are huge drama queens.

[barleygirl]

Always spreading it around, I've heard . . .

[Kerra]

Such a beautiful wonderful write

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you Kerra

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a lovely nature write. Great imagery. Lydi**

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Lydia

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and wonderful poem shared dear Cherrie. The gift of nature are a blessing for the wise to see. Thank you dear friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you:) the wild little dandelion never sounded so good, has it.

[Zoe Richardson]

What a lovely image of a furiously blooming flower! It almost reminds me of the kudzu we have here, that grows so fast and covers everything. To be remind of blossoms on a crisp autumn morning is to have the hope of spring year round!

[Cherrie Palmer]

I'm always ready that's for Sping. Right now I have a few red rose buds that are clinging to a Winter bloom.

[Lorry]

Ahhhh, could be doing with seeing that about now, as temperatures plunge and the only colour we're due to see is triple white and a few feet deep (again!)
Glad I clicked on this today. Now I shall start my mantra of repeating "it shall be once more" until spring 😊

[Cherrie Palmer]

Yes I hear a army of snowmen are on the move fasten the hatches and put on some cocoa.

[Unspoken poet]

This is so wonderful.....

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you:) possibly the title is cooler than the poem, but for the most part I am happy with it. I may tweak it a bit.