Arise

glowing stars that dance
Hypnotic in all their ways
aspire to arise

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Cherrie... the Sky is our Oasis where we can imagine
dancing Stars where Moonbeams are the Neon Lights that set the Stage for a perfect Night. Your poetry is orchestrated from your Heart ... sweet and charming as a Spring Equinox... this year 2022 on March 20.
Be safe and well. gently, Pat

[Cherrie]

Top of the morning Paddie my girl. (If I were my papa I add) give us a kiss for good luck. Where I would remove his hat to kiss his forehead.
All silliness aside ( side note: I had an Aunt Cecile and I always called her Aunt Silly) -any way- thank you.
I'd like to tell a story or event in this fashion. This is my practice piece.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie… My daughter Edie was named after my Mother Edith. Edie named her daughter Madeline after my Mothers sister Madeline. We call my granddaughter “Maddie”. I 💗 love that you call me “Paddie”. Reminds me a bit of Paddington Bear” stories. He often wore a Bright Yellow Rain Coat. Here’s hoping to see a 🌈 Rainbow soon… it has been Ages since I saw a Rainbow. Too Sad if they disappear. Hugs, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Much appreciated. I am a star gazer myself and often have my eyes pinned to the heavens. Happy new year dear Cherrie.

Just realised I have read this one before. Well worth a second read.

Chris

[Lorry]

Well, I'm sure the first five having a letter of the alphabet in common is the red herring and hypnotic killed her in the kitchen with a ladle... (I may be getting this and cluedo mixed up) 😊
What a delightful Haiku to start off with.

[Cherrie]

Sounds like a new series, When Haiku's Kill.

[barleygirl]

Beautiful skitter across the sky (((HUGS)))

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Such lovely stars can be truly hypnotic... A true stargazers word I bet ... Nicely worded cherrie

[Cherrie]

Thank you so much Kathy

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words dear Cherrie. You made the reader feel and see. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Cherrie]

Thank you for taking the time to read this through and then give me such a generous review. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hello dear Cherrie and you are welcome.

[Chris Shaw]

Uplifting and mesmerising. I pictured the scene Cherrie. Quite beautiful.

Chris

[Cherrie]

This is practice run. I'm going to try and tell a story this way.

[Chris Shaw]

Ambitious, but good on you. I have never told a story with this format before.

Chris

[Cherrie]

We'll see. I think you just have to slow it down to a snapshot.