Waiting on the moon

The setting of sun

Clings to the last bit of light

Waiting on the moon

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

Most evenings we are driving home in the setting of the Sun--
a day well spent-- the quiet prayers for Peace on Earth...
when we all enjoy the Light of the Moon... deeply, Pat

[barleygirl]

I love how you capture the suspense of that in-between moment between heavenly bodies (((HUGS)))

[Cherrie]

I'm always amazed when so much seems to happen in three lines. Thank you :) I was really happy with this one. I'm glad you were too.

[Kathy Mc Cathy]

Life's pleasures in a single moment of the sun setting taking its course and the moon rising to take its place ... A vivid window to nature's beauties ... Loved it cherrie

Kathy

[Cherrie]

Thank you so much Kathy, you'll have to try your hand at one.

[no tell writer]

Awesome Haiku, Enjoyed this a lot

[Cherrie]

Thank you so much. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Fabulous posted image Cherrie. This Haiku is so visual and it describes perfectly the sun setting while the moon is rising. A perfect hello and goodbye taking place at the same time.

Chris

[Cherrie]

Thank you Chis :)

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Ichiban 一番 Cherrie🍒

I'm going to be honest with you here … very few possess the pure spiritual freedom to create such vividly imaginative Haiku 俳句 magic as you have permeated into this splendid piece … Basho, himself, would flutter with envy.
Your artwork choice is absolute perfection … how lovely and effective it would be displayed in full size above your work.

Smitten, I am … arigatō gozai mashita, Honorable Poetess! ⁓ Richardsan 🍃

[Cherrie]

Isn't that a lovely picture . Once I found it I knew that was the right choice. I try to keep the haiku simple and not over think these. It is one of my favorites. That I stab at. :)

[Richard🖌]

Breathtaking artwork, Cherrie … whewww!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Waiting, clinging, as changes come...
Haiku Heaven here, Cherrie.
j.

[Cherrie]

Thank you Jacob and good morning. Any of the kids give you your apple today?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Ha ha...teaching college kids I would be more likely to get a joint than an apple...:)))

[Cherrie]

...Lol ...

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Beautiful simple life itself the daily changing of the guard

[Cherrie]

Yes always spectacular

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

It makes the daily grind seem insignificant

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

I once was at a beach sunrise and took a pic and the moon was there too I still marvel at it

[Cherrie]

Sounds so lovely

[Cherrie]

Sometimes the best memories come from the simplest pleasures.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

It was I hope to see it again it’s a bucket list