Quill

With the tilt of her gaze.

Her glee sparked my eye,

And the motion formed a seed,

That I planted in my mind.

Instead of soil and water

I gather my journal and quill.

Then, formed a sentence,

that I hope your soul will thrill😊

Reviews

[Temperance]

I love this write Ms. Cherrie! Flows so nicely and the words truly reflect how ideas can get planted in our minds. Lovely!!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Temp
It is funny how ideas form.

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Cherrie… with so many Mosquitoes and prickly Roses… I find myself in the Heat of Summer with the moisture from Rain… with my Pen in hand ✍️ by a Window… planting my flowers in a Poem where Cool is soothing until the Heatwave subsides. truly, Pat

[Cherrie Palmer]

Yes with such joy our doth travel.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Congratulations 🥳 in 2nd place in why I write competition

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you so much Ms. Julie. I'm proud you liked it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and amazing use of words dear Cherrie.
"Instead of soil and water
I gather my journal and quill.
Then, formed a sentence,
that I hope your soul will thrill"
I loved the above lines. Had the feel of the ancient writers in them. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Cherrie Palmer]

That's perfect cause I have been feeling ancient as if late.
Lol :) I really appreciate your review. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are not ancient yet dear Cherrie. Just writing with a educated mind. You are welcome my friend.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Absolutely love this write
Thanks for your entry into my current competition
Good luck

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you Julie

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

No worries
Hope you well

[Unspoken poet]

Ah, this is just so lovely, much enjoyed this one. Amazing!

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you

[wordman]

so quill the words of love
fore the day can start,and promises we never part

[Cherrie Palmer]

Beautiful stanza. It's great when another writer jumps on paper with you. Thank you so very much.

[wordman]

i guess you inspired me to jump on that page

[Ignosapiens]

awesome lines, beautifully composed

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you Ignosapiens

[Lorry]

Inspiration from observing the inspiration that surrounds us always, if only we look and see what wonders spark our imagination into that auto pilot thing it does, taking over from simplest thought into fully fledged and well rooted plants.
Love the inspiration that is like a jukebox left playing on random. Playing the classics and evolving new tunes in an ever expanding back catalogue 😊

[Cherrie Palmer]

I think most everyone catches that rabbit trail of inspiration, but only a writer thinks of writing it down. Which is sad. Makes me wonder how many great poems never found parchment.

[Poetic Beauty]

I love how you spark such imagery about writing. Writing is a creation and beauty

[Cherrie Palmer]

I know it adds so much to life. It's a 3 sided gift a gift to the composer, the reader & of course muse.