Perfect use of words. you said everything needed in so few words. I loved the flow of thoughts leading to the proper ending. Thank you dear Cherrie for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
I like the impact of a shorter poem. :) as ever thank you.
Perfect brevity. Your words make me think of the brushwood tresses on our silver birch. A few weeks ago, covered in droplets of rain and now sprouting green leaves. Lovely work Cherrie.
And not before time either! Greetings from a dazzlingly sunny Scotland (yes, its not a typo) although we are sticking rigorously with the Mercury forgetting where North is.
Looking forward to those few cherished days of living dangerous and going out with only one coat on 😊
Well, we can dream 😊
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Yes, live on the wild-side, one coat it is. Plus galoshes, an overcoat and don't forget your mask.
love her from afar. but she is cool towards me...so I keep my season of distance.
God, I love this poem...so damn expressive, Cherrie...
nice mix of the seasons...with metaphorical echoes.
j.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
:) thank you, it just kinda popped in my head on the way to work after I read Emma's poem 'happens:'.. read more:) thank you, it just kinda popped in my head on the way to work after I read Emma's poem 'happens:'
It's funny how reading others work kick starts the old mind.
3 Years Ago
that is why I love reading others' poems here...
so much inspiration!
dear Cherrie... the blooms of Spring have brought hope
and emotional healing. The Birds still
fly around and sing their tunes... of Clair De Lune,
especially during the night in the Moonlight. gently, Pat
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
really this poem is Emma's fault. It just popped in my head after reading 'happens: a smile springs'.. read morereally this poem is Emma's fault. It just popped in my head after reading 'happens: a smile springs'.
I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..