Once Upon A Romance

Once upon a romance your

heart called out to me,

and once upon a sunset

your love came to me.

Now the sun is rising,

 and the truth is sweeter still.

Forever and here after

I  will be your girl.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

Thats sweet. Romance is often like a fairy tale

[Cherrie Palmer]

Yes, I agree, if we're lucky enough to find it. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwwwwww how sweet and tender it is .. such a lovely read .. give me a sigh of relief it ends well for your couple .. i so expected the morning sun to reveal bad breath and an even worse mistake in a one night stand thing .. read it out loud .. warm fuzzy feelings, i have right now ;)
E.

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) no mistakes just sunsine and fuzzy feelings. :) and thank you

[Einstein Noodle]

:) .............................

[emmajoy]

This really is true Love' That girl' might be older, a little different, but what's inside is tucked and safe. You've both walked the same path, arrived at the same place, together. How beautiful is that. You've said so much with so few words. Sigh.

[Ghost/Gray]

Damn, so little words and it still seems to have a bigger meaning that i can´t seem to grasp. I love this.

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you MADS
Here is my abbreviated explanation: when we're young we spend a lot of our energy trying to grab hold of life and love, and at some point (if we're lucky) we just become one with that very thing we pursued so vigorously, and we, just are. :)

[Ghost/Gray]

Haha, thank you for replying! Have a nice day!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wonderful, kind and beautiful words shared dear Cherrie. The love came alive in these words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you. I really wanted to play on the once upon a time for this one.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well dear Cherrie and you are welcome my dear friend.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

as a romantic myself I give this 3 sighs out of three.

[Cherrie Palmer]

This was his B-day poem this year:) hit the big 6-0 :) and thank you

[Patricia Wedel]

The rising of the Sun will bless your poem
with renewed love as the seasons of the Moon
will keep the Romance in the Stars of your destiny.
A poem as sweet as buttercups in May. truly, Pat

[Cherrie Palmer]

Hello Pat and thank you, PS I love buttercups :)

[Patricia Wedel]

As we love you like fresh strawberries in June. gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

4th line I read as "love came to me"---
quite the romantic write...
and I like the use of "girl" in the last line...referring to
way back then, as well as now...the giving is what makes the relationship work, not the taking.
nice sentiment exudes from this piece.
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Ya know I couldn't decide if I liked the sound of come or came better and I will probably tweak that line.
Yes I liked linking then to now.

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes there is no greater feeling in the world than being someone’s woman but only when it’s meaningful

[Cherrie Palmer]

Thank you B.
You know I've never thought of myself that way, but that we are apart of each other. Which is about the same thing :)

[Poetic Beauty]

Sometimes we are so unified yet individual with someone that it feels as if you are one with each other.