Spend a little time

Spend a little time

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer

  Spend, a little time with me. 

Just see, the things I see. 

  Catch a feel, of this beat, 

and, spend a little, time with me.

   Let me, see the things, you see. 

Talk me, thru your dream.

   Let the rhythm, move your feet,

 and, spend a little, time with me.

© 2021 Cherrie Palmer


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Cherrie Palmer
Alright some grab a guitar in G please.

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Reminds me of the expression, "walk a mile in someone's shoes..." I like this.

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Posted 3 Years Ago


I think i would enjoy a cup of coffee and a chat with you but im a drummer and a singer I don't know g from bananas:)

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Cherrie Palmer

3 Years Ago

lol, Okay just coffee :)
Indeed a refrain that not only entreats the notion of spending time together it seems to be making a point that sometimes we are too busy to do something as simple as this vital activity.

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Cherrie Palmer

3 Years Ago

Yes, I love to keep life as simple as possible (that doesn't always work) so when life is crazy a sl.. read more
This is filled with musicality, as well as affection. I love the simplicity of expression . . . how in our noisy world of strife, sometimes we just need to quiet down & listen to each other on a one-to-one basis more often. Things can become a big public social media pile-on these days, so it's much preferable to meet on a more personal & caring level as your song suggests (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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Cherrie Palmer

3 Years Ago

:) yes people can forget how to relax. Turn off the tv set down the phone and enjoy a little one on .. read more
Can near hear the music playing, Cherrie! Think the moment is clear as clear.. soft and romantic.. and much needed right now and forever! This really smiles me up to the moon and on it! More?!

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Posted 3 Years Ago


Okay this is what it is suppose to be like....this is SHARING time together...the give and take of a real relationship....not a one sided self serving ego trip of just one of the two people.
"Let the rhythm move your feet"
I can relate to that one....I love to dance...but I love doing the romantic dance with a partner with whom I am in sync.
I got up and danced to this one.

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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