Jack be Nimble

When nursery rhymes go bad

Jack be nimble, flick, flick, flick

Sing song glow from the fire pit

Crackling flames how they dance

With that boy Jack on its back

Quick to run with the flame

So when things catch fire

You know who to blame.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Jack be nimble or Jack be burned...
don't run toward the flame or away...just run with it.
and in life if we run with the bad stuff it won't be so overwhelming...we can come to terms with it.
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Some how I lost the last two lines of the poem
But the good news is I found them, :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, you did and they wrap it up quite nicely...
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

My attempt at the creepy nursery rhyme