Sleeping Baby

Sleeping Baby

A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
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The cycle of life

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Sleeping  baby. 

Sleeping  child.

Waking teen

going wild.

Barely legal, 

young and free,

judging parents 

like you and me. 

Grandma waiting 

for the news.

A momma crying 

as baby coos.

Mother young 

relives her past

with a sleeping 

babe at her breast. 

© 2019 Cherrie Palmer


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dear Cherrie... I remember those days when our
children were sleeping babes. We loved and nourished them.
Now they have children of their own. We watch them grow and develop
and experience the beauty of nature and how the wind blows the
willow trees and many other mysteries. A beautiful poem of fulfillment
and wonderment. truly, Pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

thank you Pat,
It's so true, we negotiate life everything between growing up, and making ba.. read more
The circle of life indeed. Like father like son, like mother like daughter. It must be in the genes, or the economic circumstances which I've found have a lot to do with it.

Nice one, Cherrie. The short sentences make the flow faster which in a lot of cases grabs the readers attention.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

Thank you
Ya know I wanted it to flow fast like just like life. Zipping by in a flash.
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Rye
awww, this is such a sweet write, so nicely done.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

I completely missed your review. I'm sorry for not seeing it. Thank you so:)
Time always moves on.
One minute you're bringing them up, the next minute they're bringing the kids round to you.
On the plus side, you get to give them back.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

I do like that part
Awww...this made me teary, love my kids and grandkids so much. You have a special way writing about life. I love it...so glad you are still around.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

Thank you, I glad too it's good to write with friends who share the passion.
I like that the simplicity still retains emotional impact. I can't stop thinking about The Lion King song "Circle of Life".

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

I'm not sure if one is harder. I'm going to think about that. Writing gives me joy so I keep to w.. read more
Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

I think fitting a complex idea into a simple collection of words is always more difficult. There's .. read more
Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

I agree with that I would rather read 200 well placed words that explode with images than struggle t.. read more
this is precisely what you say it is my friend, a simple, flowing demonstration and dedication to the cycle of life, penned near to perfection

Neville

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Lovely! The essence of life written in a few words. Well done!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

Each phase seems like yesterday.
You have captured so well here Cherrie what happens within family situations. Rarely does everything turn out hunky dorey. There are many complications on the way when you raise children. They certainly tests your wits to the extremes at times, but then what would life be without them? Pretty empty.

Chris

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

Thank you Chris, yes wouldn't it be great if family behaved like a well crafted poem. :)
Simple and meaningful. My son just turns one so it really made me realize what's coming my way. Thanks for sharing :)

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Posted 5 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

It's a wonderous journey for the whole family, not always a happy journey but if your lucky and a wi.. read more
raj24

5 Years Ago

Very true :)

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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