Mornings Secret

The sunrise

What secret
did the wind just share
to make the sun
blush so sweetly.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh, Cherrie!
Loving in the warmth of sunrise ⁓ what could be sweeter!

One never knows what a conspiring wind and sun will come up with, but it's sure to be something beautiful … just like your delightful Free Verse poem.
I like the flow of this, the creatively original imagery, and gently suggestive thought it invokes.
For softer, more proper grammatical appeal, consider ending with the action adverb "sweetly", rather than with the adjective "sweet … ie: "to make the sun blush so sweetly".

Whatever, I'm (obviously) smitten! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Cherrie]

Ya know Richard, I tried it both ways and need to look at it once again.
:) and thank you for the suggestion I appreciate it very much.

[Richard🖌]

I am always happy to read your poetry, Cherrie … you're such a gentle joy! : )

[Coyote Poetry]

This is so beautiful. You said everything needed in so few words. Thank you dear Cherrie for sharing the outstanding poetry. I did like this one.
Coyote

[Cherrie]

:) it just hit me as I watched the colors rush the sky.

[Coyote Poetry]

You did well. This is poetry.

[trying_to_write]

I am in love with the simplicity of this short and sweet poem. Something about it made me smile right away!

[Najam Us Saher]

Your poem is just as sweet as the sun. Wonderful imagery, loved the words.

[H L Rose]

This makes me melt. From the title to that last sweet line, it's beautiful.

It conveys the sunrise in emotion which I feel is the best and most accurate way to describe it. It also fills me with inspiration.

It's the kind of poem meant to be memorized and recited on beautiful mornings.

[Cherrie]

I like that notion, thank you Rose.
When my granddaughter was little I made her a morning song that we would sing every morning as I'd wake her up for school.
Officially she out grew the morning song last year. Now that's she's 10 it's more of a torment than treat. :)

[H L Rose]

Haha, my mom use to sing about daisies waking me up in the morning. I hope your granddaughter is soon able to remember that song fondly. :)

[Cherrie]

She will sing it sometimes she's just not fond of waking up early anymore.
That's cool about your mom making up a daisy song.

[H L Rose]

I don't know whether she made it up or if it's just an old song. I'm glad she still likes to sing it sometimes!

[Cherrie]

..Me too. :)

[Tate Morgan]

That’s really sweet I like the idea of the wind sun earth stars moon all talking to one another

[Cherrie]

Thank you Tate and I hope you have a happy new year.

[Tate Morgan]

thank you Cherrie Happy New Year

[Jade]

Ah, I love this write, flows great and it's lovely

[Cherrie]

Thank you, Brandie.

[Jade]

not a problem

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Delightfully sweet and playful little poetic gem. Made me smile and I thank you for that Cherrie!

[Cherrie]

Thank you Annette

[richieb]

I really like this little poem. You could put it on a piece of wood and display it. well done.
Richie b.

[Cherrie]

Thank you Richie
I get a front row seat to the sunrise each morning and this appeared so soft and warm. Just like a blush.

[Lyn Anderson]

Lovely and short and sweet

[Cherrie]

Thank you Lyn
:)I hope you have a wonderful Christmas