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A Poem by Cherrie Palmer
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morning fog

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Billowing fog laced so tight

Ignites my imagination.

While a gentle zephyr climbs the sloop

its tender touch drapes over.

The fog and she begins a dance

Perfectly timed with a 2,4 beat.

Warming sun kissed her face and in its grasp

The morning fog is erased.

© 2018 Cherrie Palmer


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always interesting to watch a fog lift or dissipate...it is like a confusion we feel sometimes when we are in love...shrouded in it, it gradually lifts and we come to some understanding of the feelings, and why.
j.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

Yes I find fog mesmerizing
the wonders of nature never ceased, there will always be beauty despite what state it is in. I miss foggy mornings here.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

I agree each person may have a preference but if we can take a moment beauty is all around.
sette

6 Years Ago

true really true
Reminds me of a foggy morning sunrise on a mountain range.

Your description feels very visceral to me.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

Thank you, for reviewing this poem. :) I enjoy the emotions weather evokes.
i feel like I am in the fog watching the poem come to life... Thank you for taking me there with your words..

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Posted 6 Years Ago


I can imagine every word in your poem, close my eyes and be transported to a wonderful scene on the water. The sun burning away the fog and the dance between wind and ship is uplifting and exactly what I needed this morning. Good one, Cherrie. CD

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

I love watching the fog
Cherrie Palmer

6 Years Ago

And watching the waltz that occurs on water is amazing

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Cherrie Palmer
Cherrie Palmer

Springfield , MO



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I am a published poet and love poetry. After a lifetime of country living, I'm making a move back to town. I find my surroundings a great inspiration to me. I also have two books on Amazon Kindle: .. more..

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