A Cup Of Kindness

the reuniting of old friends

Lift your glass and sit with me

As stories we color bright.

 

Let us wax the moon and stars

Till the sun brings its light.

 

Your breath of life beats in my heart

And your smile I always see.

 

So with this chance encounter

Sit and drink with me.

Reviews

[karthik]

I really enjoyed these lines
Let us wax the moon and stars, Till the sun brings its light.

What a feeling to have drink until sun brings light when moon and stars are waxed

nice

[Cherrie]

:) thank you Karthik, I look forward to return the visit.

[Fran Marie]

A toast of good cheer..always relaxing to have a little drink and good conversation..

Nice Work

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Not a drinker, but i certainly can envision the moments described in this poem. Like some say, there is nothing like good wine and good company.

A gently flowing piece. Nice work.

[Cherrie]

Thank you so much

[genocide]

sit and drink with a friend and have a very good time is that what this poem is trying to say

[Cherrie]

Yes, it is about taking time to catch up with an old friend.

[genocide]

yeah I like it

[barleygirl]

This is a beautiful reminder of so many all-nighters, drinking wine with someone special. You've captured all the essentials in your brief word portrait . . . conjures up so many deeply-hidden longings! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Cherrie]

Thank you, Margie. It was fun to make

[Neville]

Tate just said it all Cherrie, what an understated near perfect little gem you have poured for us here. Here's to friends eh' and I'll drink to that..........Neville

[Cherrie]

Thank you, Neville :)

[Neville]

More than a pleasure Cherrie...N

[Tate Morgan]

I think i love this one best of yours. Simple yet beautiful . I have always believed it is better to use common language in uncommon ways You did well here

[Cherrie]

I believe that also let the reader dazzle themselves with created images rather than cutting thru a woven mystery of symbolism
And thank you so very much.

[lightsong]

Your title draw me to read Your poem, and how sweetly smiling Your words are, there is so much kindness through them, uplifting to the spirit, and the flow is great too, adding more magic to Your poem, thank You for sharing Your cup of kindness with us.

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... uplifting sentiments Cherrie! well said!
Gun toir am mullach os a chionn nach bi sinn a 'tuiteam, agus gum faod sinn a bhith a' cruinneachadh charaidean gu h-ìosal.
or:That the roof above us never fall in, and may we friends gathered below never fall out.
E.

[Cherrie]

Now that's a toast

[Einstein Noodle]

Aye! ;)................

[Chris]

The sentiment is sweet and present but the rhythm of the flow feels off... second and fourth stanzas.

[Cherrie]

I'll look at the flow, thank you