Miles

love note

It is true we have traveled some miles

On this road of life.

Always, with forever insight.

We have weathered all of life’s storms

And shared secret dreams and hopes

Whether the road is rocky or smooth

I have just what I need when I’m with you

So kiss me my dear on this day that we wed

And let’s do it all over again.

Reviews

[Richard🖌]

Aw, How beautiful and endearing, Cherrie!

I hope this is for your own anniversary, and that it is your mate to whom you've penned it in such a sweetly elegant voice … I love the imagery and sensations you've flowed all through my senses.

Warmest thanks, and a bushel of hugs for sharing this most excellent piece from your amazing heart, M'Lady! ⁓ Richard

[Cherrie Palmer]

It was for our anniversary. Matt has had many a poem forced upon him :) through the year.

[Richard🖌]

LOL!
He must be very happy.

[Nadia_2]

This poem stood out for me. The atmosphere is safe and calming. I can almost feel sunshine on my face as I read it! Great work.

[Willard Wells]

Beautiful words and tribute to a long and unending love between two lovers. Well done.

[alifeacoustic]

Beautifully captured. It reads so soft and full of longing. The eagerness to do it all again shows that you were doing something right to begin with. Great write, thanks for sharing.

[Cherrie Palmer]

:) thank you

[alifeacoustic]

You're very welcome.

[DAVE WALTON]

So sweet I wish I had written it for my wife!

[Cherrie Palmer]

thank you Dave

[Cherrie Palmer]

and re pin it I don't mind.

[Samuel Dickens]

Until you mentioned a kiss, I thought this love letter might have been for that marvelous old Studebaker pickup. (Pretty sure it's a Studebaker, at least) Oh, well--either way, it's lovely.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I so want one

[jacob erin-cilberto]

reminds me of a Beach Boys' song..."let's get back together and do it again"
i like rebirth of love after a rocky road, as love usually is...but this shows the willingness to struggle over the bad spots to get to the good...i really like this piece.

read the sixth line as "whether the road is..."

[Cherrie Palmer]

Ha! what a dork I hate when I do that. thank you Jacob so very much :)

[Philip Muls]

Again you capture the beauty of a long and lasting love with a lot of miles traveled. You become 'compagnons de route' as we say in Belgium.

Well done.