Like Molasses

My pond on a still night

Evening light sashays across center stage,

as both May flies and striders closely skim the seamless body of water.

Like winter performers gliding on ice they dance across their boundaries.

The soft babbling of the brook feeds the night sounds & lends not a ripple to the water.

Only a feeding bass breaks the barrier,

interrupting the sound of the breeze for a fast snack.

His ripples appear quickly and then stretch out like molasses

only to find stillness once again laid out before me.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Gorgeous poem and pic of your pond.
Serene and lovely.

[Cherrie]

Thank you Sami 😊

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Cherrie.

[Temperance]

What a lovely scenic poem, Cherrie. Great imagery puts the ready there by the water. Thank you for sharing! I enjoyed the read. Temp

[Dolly]

That is very sweet :) I love your description.

[Cherrie]

Thank you, Dolly I look forward to you posting that I may return the visit.

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful, tender scene filled with the perfect peace of night. It seems to breathe alive and let the lingering light illuminate the mind.

[Cherrie]

thank you Craig I wrote it in April just before sunset.

[Tate Morgan]

you have a little bit of craig and emma in you I see. Very ephemeral very beautiful

[Cherrie]

thank you Tate :)

[lee von cleef]

a minds eye can slow time,so can Cherrie.

[Cherrie]

:) thank ya Lee

[Mark]

I can hear crickets.... thanks for this lovely work.

[Cherrie]

thank you Mark yes crickets aways around :)

[Barbara Kasey Smith]

Beautiful & full of nice images! BKSmith

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Well Done! Keep it up! Do u read mine 2 TIME and MANNER..if possible then gives ur review.. U can also add me on facebook

[roarke]

I think this is what we're really put on this planet for. Glad someone is capable of recognizing it.
The moment becomes you Cherrie.

[Cherrie]

:) thank you roarke for such a kind review, made me smile