Forever and Always

love

My day doth spin with thoughts of you

And my mind falls fast, in lingering moments once consumed.

The beat of my heart sets time to your own and

my soul is void, when my hand, you do not hold.

Vitality of youth brings color to my day and

harmony exhaled sends peace my way.

Proof of life is in steady feet and the path to my heart

is most plain for you to see.

Cradled in your care and lips laced in a kiss

And more of the same is all I can wish.

This rose I spy here where we once met, is waiting on you

With this message attached:  XoXo

again and again.

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

out across the buffalo grass ,she tossed out a Dazzler, the woolen blanket settled , as he tied the line back loose to a naked cedar. Protected alone they slowed anticipation, chaps ,spurs,gloves,hat.buck-stiched shotguns,crockets,stetson,A cowboy ,a Hand, the compliment of her shy but true man.Sparse in a full land, She gave all ,country tru,, and now the open country's bending twists have buried the Hand who stepped off the Dun,here but gone, she carries her rose, to spark crimson,maple waves in the buffalo grass evening amber.Come back cowboy comeback .

[Cherrie]

Nice use of imagery in this small excerpt

[lee von cleef]

I miss Oklahoma some days, your poems made me, feel a little western.

[Cherrie]

lol well nothing wrong with that :)

[lee von cleef]

I pieced two together,"Come back cowboy comeback." what do think and thank you in advance.

[Jo March]

You write with immense love and passion, it is beautiful. I don't normally like romantic poems, but this was so subtle and sweet.

[Cherrie]

you might like 'Old Smoke' better and thank you :)

[Chris]

I like the lightness and heart of this one...

[Eloha]

You are one of my favorite writers, alive or dead, I think just my spirit is attuned to your natural voice. I'm not certain what that is, perhaps a likeness of soul and mind, and the romance that makes a good poet write, I guess in conclusion, it's the topics you write about that most appeal to me!

[Cerise]

Wooow...marvellous..the way teh emotions are detailed..the feelings r told...loved it..:)...very nicely written on love