Deceiving

In a daze,

i walk barefoot

to no where

within the vale where

my love trod mercilessly

last night.

 

Gasping and gasping for air,

i hope with a frantic heart

i wilt see the light of the atrocious

art of the phantom i always infatuate

with

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. Great strength in the words of this short poem. Each line adding to the story and create more mystery. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Thea]

Absolutely great...I find all your works interesting...
:)))

[SuddenCognito]

Really good, I think the language used is excellent.

[stars are far]

This was really great ..
keep that up :)