'No way to go'

Spreading,spreading,spreading-

with atrocious desires no more,

i spread my wings and flutter-

them towards the zenith of the-

heavens in the misty morn golden-

hearts wilt not be rebels.

 

Winging,winging with the fiery-

wings,Joy,Hale,Hearty and Grace-

are all i need to defy gaudiness that-

tries to bore me away from the pathway-

to craving the effeteness that neither Grievance-

nor Malevolence will enjoy dwelling with.

 

Out of the azure,the skies is masked by-

the hanging clouds that herald thunder and-

lightning.

 

Thunder roars with a rising deceptive crescendo-

as the roar deceives the exasperating lightning-

strikes on me mercilessly.

 

With no lies,I'm now an aircraft limping onwards-

to the land G and M conquer.

Reviews

[stars are far]

This had a nice rhyme ..and great idea.
well done :)

[Dayran]

Rthymic and mucical.

[Thea]

I like the repetition of some words, it made a great impact on the whole piece...
You did fine once again... :)))

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. Hard when we have no desire and place to go. Sometime the freedom to fly away is all we got. Great language and description made me think when reading the poem. I like how you ended the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote