It ENDS and It Begins

Wholeheartedly with-

I walk onwards to the-

hollow where thou vanished-

poignantly at the dusk of icy-

clime.

 

With the image of thine that-

palpitates my heart to no desire-

to forgo,thy gleam wilt be sparkling

again in the depth of the enormous-

mouth where i wilt wade towards-

the subterranean rivers thou drowned-

unwittingly with joy my love crave.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Many places you took me with your words. Create some visions of many location in this short poem. I like how you ended the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[stars are far]

Great !

[Dayran]

Cool!

[Thea]

Very interesting...Well crafted in every line...
Really good...
:)))