---------love or hate?

'Towards thou,I wriggle-

with the heart enveloped-

by thy beauteous image of-

joy that bonds to the vale where-

thou sowed the seeds of gold-

over the laughter of joyance that-

souls heeded and craved.

Reviews

[Dayran]

The soul works according to a plan. Sometimes a person may come to intuit of such a plan and experience a curious sense of elation, without actually knowing why. Its important to remain coherent on the guidelines of knowing such stuff. A poem with a hint of sharing the same understanding!

[Coyote Poetry]

Old rock and roll song. "Love and hate is a heartbeat apart." I like the way you use words. Each line with purpose and strength. I like the complete poem. You said a lot with sparseness of words. That is a skill. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote