''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''TITLES FROM YOUR HEARTS,THANKS.

In the beauteous-

morn,thy empty-

shell where my soul-

dwellth with love is-

placed on the isle by-

the emulous native. 

 

Beneath the azure,

thou sleep eternally-

with woe no more,

like an infant cocooned-

everlastingly by the fiends-

who crave covetous affection-

from crystal love.

Reviews

[nyi]

how did you manage to write this piece? This is amazing..I have to re-read the words...You should give the name though..cheers..

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing words create good visions. I like the way you use the English language. Getting the most of each word. I had to read the poem a few times. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Brandi Nicole]

i do like this one. such an impressive choice of words.

[Thea]

Great one...Nice vocabulary... :)))

[Dayran]

You speak of an experience that is quite unusual and yet it reaches some aspect of the understanding like the legends of the gods. Curious! Keep writing!