------what do you think as a reader____--

With the icy-heart-

no more,i limp onwards-

to thee like a lion craving-

infatuation in the forest-

dark of forlorness.

 

To thee,now i roar again

with pride in the-

shadow of Chimera-

that denies the affection-

of Golden Heart.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Can't keep a Lion down too long. He will raise more pissed off and dangerous. I like the story and the good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thea]

Agree with Rhea! Short but filled with well crafted expressions...Good write... :)))

[Rhea]

less words bt so much expression....:)

[Dayran]

Where the chimera represents the start of the missing link to man, the lion must certainly represent the experience of the impersonal non-human. Like the world, the impersonal is all around the man. There's no need to fear, you are the home of the man. An uncanny write on the symbolism of the human development.

[Branch Isole]

Your tenacity as a writer, and as one who is open and ready for critique is admirable. Due to poetry's presentation nature, it is necessary to convey complete story lines and related thoughts first and foremost.
Detailing the emotion(s) you wish to present by tieing it/them together stanza by stanza and then painting a picture around it might be helpful.