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Afar from my sights,

thou walk barefoot-

ruefully with love on-

the vale where thou trod-

exasperatingly in the silence of-

fiery love like the dreary love-

that denied the gaudy truth of-

love.

Reviews

[Thea]

I agree with Michael...But anyway, this is beautiful...Oh, what love really does...So much passion...

[Michael of Gilead]

Too many "loves" you need to use some synonims

[Rhea]

Hmmmmmmmmm.... indeed sometimes silence expresses many things...

[Branch Isole]

An attempt to use adjectives as metaphors does little to paint or convey images, as this piece so aptly points out.

[Dayran]

Love grows willful when denied the truth of its simple and plain character. It may be seeking to put on a disguise. A poem of curiosity about love's innocence.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of words and the questions raised by the poem. Love control us. We cannot control love. No weakness in this excellent poem.
Coyote