Readers have the rights to entitle this poem^^ (the title comes from the readers' understanding)

In the morn of thy-

malevolence,a flash

of lightning heralds bloodshed

that falls on thy flesh-

with tears of sinful lies.

 

In the morn of thy malevolence,

neither the gracious heralds nor-

the kinswoman wilt embrace the-

new path of thine that the fiends-

of thy summits love treading with-

the laughter thy precious love denies-

in the silence of dreadful love.

 

Atop of the mountain in the dawn,

thou art an acolyte named after-

the vigilante of love.

Reviews

[Branch Isole]

Malevolence, fiends, acolyte, precious, dreadful and vigilant love?

[J Kiplinger Young]

I would suggest that if you don't have a title for a poem or do not desire a title for a particular poem, then do not place a title on it. Do not call it untitled either, if you do not have a title on a poem, the first line becomes the title by default, indicating to the reader that there is no title

[Dayran]

Its reminiscent of Eros & Psyche, two lovers who came to 'see' the nature of their being and lost the sense of the mystery and romance in their relationship. Your poem brings it to life.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. I like words. The more we think and read. The better we can face life and do great things. I could break down this amazing poem and discuss the powerful statements.
"of thy summits love treading with-
the laughter thy precious love denies-
in the silence of dreadful love."
Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Thea]

Nice vocabulary...Quite short but the concept looks great...Well done... :)))

[OtherWorldWoman]

I like it. The older style is really neat and adds a sort of mysterious beauty to the poem and I also find it interesting that you leave the title up to the reader.