No tiltle(from the readers' hearts)

What you read is what you see.

Within the heart of-

thine,I'm wading my way-

through the red liquid where-

the beasts of craving love drowned-

in gaudy truth of love i want to wade-

through with the gleam of love cast on me-

by the fiery passion of gracious  love that neither

the demons nor the kinsman of them crave for-

in the ghastly liquid of transient euphoria.

 

Within the heart of thine,

the fear of wading is the shadow-

of my pathways no more,

in the silence of braveness,

I continue to wade in a no sorry-

plight like bloodshed flowing onwards

to the subterranean river where thy image of-

the golden heart emerges.

 

Wading,wading forever within-

the heart of thine with icy-sights of-

hatred.

Author's Note

Comments are needed,thanks

Reviews

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

thanks again

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. The lines had many stories hidden in this tale. You could make this a story. Explaining each section desire and journey.
"by the fiery passion of gracious love that neither
the demons nor the kinsman of them crave for-
in the ghastly liquid of transient euphoria."
I like the ending to this amazing poem. One of the strong statements could be the lead for this outstanding poem.
Coyote