Namless(again it's from the readers' heart)

From the readers' hearts

In the calmness of-

rueful joy,i spread-

my wings like the beast-

that heeds to the deceiving-

cry of the seraphs who dwell-

in covetous love that the birth of-

love denies.

 

In the tranquil silence of-

this clime,I flap my wings-

with fiery sights of love and wing-

my way out of the trodden ways of-

crumbling love that shadows flicking pathways-

to the zenith of euphoria where the knell of gaudy

love heard.

Author's Note

Comments are appreciated and needed^^thanks

Reviews

[Branch Isole]

Many of your poems have a defined classic romanticism tone to them. While this may be somewhat unusual today, it has a mellowness not often found in much of the autobiographical "blah blah blahgs" or self-indulgent rants, of 'free or blank' verse which permeates many writing sites.
You might attempt to eliminate too much adverbial and adjective repetitions and expand your metaphoric imagery, - Just a thought.

[Cheng Yew,Chew]

thanks again^^

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. I like the strength in the statements. In a strong poem. One of the powerful and main statements can be the title. I would use "In the calmness of- Or In the tranquil silence of- I like the way you use the language. Remind me of the great Asia Poet's I have read in my life. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

this clime

rueful joy