I think it's true that once a relationship is done, the focus is on the bad rather than the good. I like the lines :
"the hope i rented
never would have been
available
had you not posted
or collected
what was given"
because it speaks of first attraction. A beautiful write. Penny
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Penny, as usual, I really enjoyed your take on this piece. Thanks so much for taking the time to sha.. read morePenny, as usual, I really enjoyed your take on this piece. Thanks so much for taking the time to share your thoughts with me.
this i so much relate to...there was someone like this in my life...the almost, then the wasn't, but also the maybe should have been---but we not only seemed, for a time, we were.
Lovely...I love visiting your writing in the quite of the night... it seems to bring a calming peace to my soul. The words you spill flow like rain water, finding it's way to streams...carrying a wistful dream which is your voice here. Quite beautiful to behold.
"can i change
the dollar
of our pieces
come out with
3 quarters
2 dimes
and a nickel of our
time"
And wow...that stanza, blew my mind. Loved it and every line of this piece. Well done as always.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Well, you certainly know how to give a compliment :). Thanks so much and I'm glad you connected. read moreWell, you certainly know how to give a compliment :). Thanks so much and I'm glad you connected.
CM.
10 Years Ago
lol, well with your writing it is easy to come up with those compliments. :)
Hopefully you find something in some of my words here...If not, there is beauty in the music (which is not mine, clearly). Listen....always listen. more..