Heartfelt and emotional. The flow of this one was impeccable to me. In my current state of mind, this one speaks to me in subtle tones. I ended the reading with a sigh... like the closing of a book that was my whole world for a time and is now just a memory. You write in a way that allows the reader to step inside something, and for that I applaud you.
I haven't seen a piece formatted like this in a long time. Seems "real poets" write in block stanzas only. I disagreed then (when I sometimes set a piece up like this) and disagree now. The line in parentheses as well. Love it. An aside. A side thought. Perfect for the point being made.
Format aside, the writing is impeccable, relatable, not overly. wrought, and unique.
A small thing I suppose, but the title rocks.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm not really a big fan of "the rules" ;) formatting frames the con.. read moreThanks, I'm glad you enjoyed. I'm not really a big fan of "the rules" ;) formatting frames the content...at least in my world. I appreciate your kind words.
You have me captivated with the very first piece I clicked upon. Making me want to subscribe to... listen to more. You are familiar to me in your essence...your phrasing...I feel like this is a memory of my own. I hope you don't mind me walking through...this is worthy. P.s. Birdy is one of my many favorites :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much for the feedback. It feels good to connect :)
You caught me... I think I'm gonna cry... freeze or melt from this. Stunning CM, and I am stunned.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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Why to miss, a love, a past, memory, when all that is inside of you, makes you still breathe, makes you walk, through, those memories, treasure them, as long as you can, treasure them, until your memory fades away, never close a thing, for it has mind-gates, openings, paradoxes, and other than that, free ways, after you've seen these endless galaxies, of the mirrored vixen's beauty...
Heartfelt and emotional. The flow of this one was impeccable to me. In my current state of mind, this one speaks to me in subtle tones. I ended the reading with a sigh... like the closing of a book that was my whole world for a time and is now just a memory. You write in a way that allows the reader to step inside something, and for that I applaud you.
Hopefully you find something in some of my words here...If not, there is beauty in the music (which is not mine, clearly). Listen....always listen. more..