something, all right

something about skirts
and thighs
has me wishing
for at least two more eyes

can I have
(maybe)
something more to feel
sensory
delicate circuitry
wrap your arms around
and just
rewire me

something about shoulders
and straps
makes me fire
each begging synapse
and wonder how
tanks could ever run
empty

easy to see
wants become needs
unpracticed knees
that wicked hem
at it again
the taunt of mid-calf
calls out

custom tailored
every time

Reviews

[Dana Alsamsam]

mmm thighs and shoulders are two of the absolute sexiest parts of a woman's body. they definitely invite the strong desire to touch! i especially like the line "rewire me" which is a lovely explanation of the intense want to just be consumed by the beauty of someone's body. this was a sultry piece that was great to read!

[Ken Simm.]

Thinking where would your extra eyes be? Ooooh thighs you would be badly! as they say in my native Lancashire.

[K. Louis]

you're an animal...in the best kind of way ;)

[ChemicalMadness]

Thank you? ;)

[Shane William]

Yes! You gotta love the female form! And all those insatiable taunts. As they say, your preaching to the choir. And this choir is singing right along.

[ChemicalMadness]

Glad you enjoyed

[Robbie~xoxo~]

NICE! Very flirty...I have to admit, you have captivated my thoughts in the direction towards the southern region~the legs ;)
Loved the wordplay... teasingly wicked!

[ChemicalMadness]

Who, me? Tease?

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

See, I knew there was a reason I have a closet full of skirts and tank tops...haha Interesting piece for you, my friend. I have to wonder at the fact that you are not being cryptic at all in these lines. I quite like the wordplay and the flow; I have become quite comfortable and happy with the texture of your writing. Nicely played...

[ChemicalMadness]

Thanks, GF. I have to de-cryptify every now and then....

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Certainly de-cryptified haha

[Ed Hart]

you pinned the tail on all us fellow donkeys with these excellent observations...the reason we can't have additional sensing apparatus is that we'd keep asking for more until we'd look so strange they'd put us in a zoo, and there they'd keep us very well

[ChemicalMadness]

Always a pleasure to see you've stopped by, my friend! Thank you.