Yesterday's nights

I awoke and found you gone

We were bloodshot
We were fever hearts
Salt stained skin

I've never been so lost

Reviews

[J_Star]

I like "found you gone"--not "you were gone," but "found"--such a rude awakening.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

These short pieces speak volumes...they put thoughts into my head and emotions into my spirit. The idea of "awaking" (both literally and metaphorically) to the death of a relationship is haunting and something I can relate to...

[Horizon K.]

Wow, incredible imagery and depth of loss... I absolutely love short pieces that leave me with so much... Fantastic!