Pursuit

and so

    these clouds

    are ours

we must pass through

 

in pursuit of fleeting suns

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

always the wordsmith...i so admire how you phrase...yes, we have to get through the bad stuff to get to the good stuff, don't we.

nicely said as usual...

jacob

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Short and sweet..."these clouds/are ours"--a sublime thought, if not a little melancholy, but then again, perhaps it's just my own projections. You always impress me. Kudos!

[Cool Handless Luke]

short and sweet and yet deep with plenty to provoke thought and introspection. i just posted something that follows a similar train of thought. it's a bit complicated as i tend to do. your poem here is more inspiring. nice work

[ChemicalMadness]

i had to fight myself on this one...it was very hard to stop where i did....i thought there was more....i had more words....maybe someday (soon?) i'll add more. something told me to just leave it though. for now i'll listen. sometimes something is a voice to be ignorned....sometimes not. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, CHL.

[Cool Handless Luke]

i understand. i always think there is more and end up fighting myself. sometimes the more you seek isn't even at then end. trust your instincts though. this is very poignant in it's brevity.