Second chances
A Book by Chelsea
 When the love of your life comes back after being absent for 5 years, could you forgive them? Can Paige and Tristan sort everything out?  © 2015 Chelsea
Author's Note
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Please understand that this is a rough draft and I'm new to the whole letting people read my writing thing. It scares the hell out of me. This story is not at all finished, I'm just curious to know what people think.
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Coulda', shoulda', woulda'. If only life was filled with do-overs.
Very good story. I liked the idea of second chances and the characters were interesting. There are a few technical problems, but you said this was a rough draft. That can be fixed in the subsequent revisions.
You have a good narrative voice. The story flows to a satisfying conclusion.
Good work. Keep writing.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you! This review made my night!
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Chelsea
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-I'm 26
-I'm far from perfect when it comes to writing.
-I could use some improvement.
-I write because sometimes life gets the best of me and I just need to get away for a little while.
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