A whisper of silk

A whisper of silk

A Poem by Cherry_blossom_red
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Wrote this some time ago

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A whisper of silk, a rustle of lace
Who is here in this long forgotten place?
Is it he? No, my eyes lie, deceive
He's dead and gone, still my life goes on
Times were different then, my thoughts recorded
with parchment and pen
With him gone all this while
Feels like I'm still unable at all to smile
But when the time comes to walk that final mile
He'll be there to greet me, heartfelt and warm
On that day I'll know it's over, finally home, out of the storm

© 2015 Cherry_blossom_red


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Cherry_blossom_red
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I like the overall tone of it. Sad and nostalgic at first but with a glimmer of hope at the end and the imagery overall is just right up my alley. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherry_blossom_red

8 Years Ago

Super happy you liked it :D thank you for your awesome review!
Scheherazade

8 Years Ago

You're welcome. :)

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Added on March 29, 2015
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Cherry_blossom_red
Cherry_blossom_red

Rocky Mountain House, Alberta, Canada



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