Waiting on the Warm

Waiting on the Warm

A Poem by Fabian G. Franklin
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The frigid sun crept slowly

straining to peek from behind

a steel blue wall of cloud;

a giant menacing wave on the horizon

Madrones, flexing bare muscles

stand upright in banks of snow

wooden bodies trembling

beneath waxy leaves

dangling delicate as the wind blows

like mute chimes beckoning

the sympathy of Spring

when the fruits return

and there is sweetness in everything

Until then they hibernate

beneath arctic skies of gray

where the snowplow pushed its way

piling icy drifts onto the curb

The Madrones dream of summer past

They dream of melting ice

and flowing waters warm,

standing, stalwart, in the frost

muscular arms in testimony

of what once was and what is lost

Oh, the world must turn

and seasons change after the storm

and until then, they sleep

shivering in the struggling dawn

dreaming cold and deep

waiting on the warm



© 2025 Fabian G. Franklin


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i never heard of the Madrone tree. had to look it up ... your personifications are spot on says i! .. i especially like the flexing bare muscles and wooden bodies and muscular arms (really like that one) they are magnificent trees no doubt ... thanks for sharing and blessing my day with a new thing learned .. the Madone Tree :)
E.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

good way to spend waiting time .. i hope the meeting went your way
Fabian G. Franklin

1 Month Ago

The jury's still out on that one. Had some biopsies done and just got the stitches out. Time will te.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

oh man! .. dear brother .. so sorry to feel your pain .. truly! ... have you now on my prayer hit li.. read more



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i never heard of the Madrone tree. had to look it up ... your personifications are spot on says i! .. i especially like the flexing bare muscles and wooden bodies and muscular arms (really like that one) they are magnificent trees no doubt ... thanks for sharing and blessing my day with a new thing learned .. the Madone Tree :)
E.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

good way to spend waiting time .. i hope the meeting went your way
Fabian G. Franklin

1 Month Ago

The jury's still out on that one. Had some biopsies done and just got the stitches out. Time will te.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

oh man! .. dear brother .. so sorry to feel your pain .. truly! ... have you now on my prayer hit li.. read more
Great images and lines. The opening image of a frigid sun I know well. Those days so cold that the sun itself seems to have no heat or effect it is only a lightbulb in a freezer. Loved it Fabian

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Fabian G. Franklin
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