Breakdown

The heart the mind the physical form,
Connected veins of life,
Emotional trees span throughout,

A clock one second out,
Dismay and breakdown occur,
The ticking of time the sync unstable,

Balance earthquakes are immediate,
Energy disorientated,
A mechanical error is inevitable,

Human interference emotionally,
Direct cause concluded,
Breakdown of an entities trust,

Abortion of obstruction,
A solitary solution,
Hinderance removal complete,
Life may continue.

Reviews

[Chels]

Thanks so much for your review :) much appreciated. I won't let on just yet see if someone can tell me what it's about ;)

[DoormanDan]

I have no idea why, but at first, this poem made me think of what would happen to a spacecraft a few moments before it crossed the event horizon of a black hole. I really liked this poem!