Invisible

Poem

Standing there,
I faded away,
Like a shadow dissapears with the changing of the sun,
I was gone.

Feeling sucked out of me,
Love ripped out of my soul,
Dispersed.

Anger, resentment of oneself,
Rage of allowing feelings of shadow to pass through my life,
Keep your darkness take it back.

Light shines in my world,
A decision,
To stay in the light,
I will not live in your darkness,
Goodbye black soul.

Reviews

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Cool piece. The real beauty of this opus is that, like all writing, it can be interpreted in many ways. My interpretation is the feeling of being insignificant. The feeling of being invisible in the eyes of the people of the world.
Well written and very deep.